Your mission is to write the shortest and most effective add derived from the below information for submission in the paper Monday. I am trying to attract a further three people to rent a room each.
The information below…for you to go on has been printed and distributed to areas around town and put up in notice boards. It has sourced one very good tenant but that's not good enough I need three more so I have got to change something! Bare n mind you need to use only a few words as it's paper and expensive to print lots of lines.
I look forward to hearing YOUR killer add.
PRIVATE ROOM AVALAIBLE FOR RENT
TAKE STRAIGHT AWAY OR EXPRESS INTEREST FOR THE FURTURE- Ph.0439301447
- No Bond Up Front Needed – Instalment plan available
- Suit quiet independent computer geek or person studying or working.
- Nice easy living arrangements
- Near CBD Restaurants Pubs & Clubs Shopping etc
- Free Spar Bath and Deluxe Washing Machine and Dishwasher
- 1 wks up front – $90 per week and $10 Utilities
- Easy Short or Long Term Stay
- Cheaper smaller room also available!
- Nice Close Central Location Near Tennis Courts
- Built-in-Robe
- Public Phone Access 50 mtrs
- Set up Internet Access
- Free – Partially furnished at no extra cost
- Big Rooms and Nice
- Car Parking for four plus
- Two fire places; one in a room; plus central gas heating
- Bus stop at the front door
- Phone anytime day or night – Ph.0439301447 – [email protected]
- Male or Female – Japan St
- Taking inquires from today onwards come for quick inspection today!
Private Room (Deluxe)
No Bond Needed Upfront
No Lease Application
Short or Long Term
CBD – Partially furnished
$90 + $10 Power/Gas Week
Easy walk in today!
Ph. 0434717576How about this idea .
Short advert .
For further details see www.{your website}.com.auPlace a web site with all the details. Use a service like http://www.freeweb.com
I might go with that idea! Do you know of a place that's active and ready to go now!
It needs to be a very short name extention.
yeah i would go for that one
Is there any online sites to put an add in for free that also actually reach local towns?
Also I'm looking for a few informative documents that can be printed up and put on the wall in kitchen, bathroom, dining etc just that explains about saving on 'green energy' how to save on water usage and also general house rules, dish washing and general things management etc.
I don't want it to be a 'power trip' just notices of guidance on how to live in a shared accommodation! Anyone know of any or is using your own then I can access to print off?
Hi,
This might sound quirky but you could try registering your rooms for lease on my space. This would mean your advertisement would be available for a wider audience.
Don.
- No Bond Up Front Needed – Instalment plan available
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