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    Hi Guy’s,
    I’m about to advertise my first deal for sale with some terms in it. I would love some feedback (and revision) please, if anyone feels like having a go at it much appreciation, so far below is what i have written.

    Cheers,

    Don
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    Are you saving to buy your home?I can help you with your deposit, bank finance & 1st home owners grant.

    I have a 3 bedroom family home for sale in South Tweed Heads
    A stunning, spacious 2.5 years old free standing house, with built in wardrobes, large modern granite kitchen, 2 separate living areas, 2 bathrooms, remote double garage, air conditioning, 520 m2 block set in a quiet gated complex including 3 pools, spa & BBQ area.

    $420,000 less $50,000 owner finance. Call Don on xxxx

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